Department

of German

 

 

 

Introduction to Modern Germany

From Unification to Unification

 

GERM1060

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Co-ordinator: Ms Ingrid Sharp

 

i.e.sharp@leeds.ac.uk


Table of Contents

 

 

Aims of the Module

 

Teaching and Research in the Department of German at Leeds

 

Essential Reading

 

The Lectures – Semester One

 

The Lectures – Semester Two

 

Seminars

 

Group allocation 2005-6

 

Assessment

 

Essay Questions Christmas 2005

 

Background Reading

 

Past Essay and Exam Papers

 

Essay evaluation profile

 

Texts – Aufgaben for class work

 

 

 


Introduction to Modern Germany

From Unification to Unification

 

GERM1060

 

Co-ordinator: Ms Ingrid Sharp

 

 

Aims of this Module

By the end of the module, you should be:

 

·        aware of the main events (political, social, economic and cultural) that have shaped Germany’s development in the period 1870-1990 (from the ‘first’ unification of 1870-1 to the second unification 1990).

·        aware of the main dilemmas that have shaped German history as a whole in the period 1870-1990.

·        able to relate key events to the bigger picture.

 

In short, we expect you to have both a factual knowledge of key moments in German history and a conceptual understanding of the broader themes.

 

For example, you should be able to tell us about events such as the founding of the Weimar Republic and relate this to concepts such as liberalism and authoritarianism which have shaped German history over the long term.

 

Lectures will be in English or German, but seminars always in German – so this is another opportunity to become confident in spoken German.

 

Rote Fäden (Fäden?)

 

  • German Unity: what kind of unified state do Germans want to live in? Why has Germany been so fragmented and divided for so much of its history? What is Germany?

 

  • Liberalism and Authoritarianism: what tensions have existed between liberalism and authoritarianism in the search for a unified German state? Is it possible to have a liberal German state? Or must it always be authoritarian?

 

  • National Identity: what is ‘German’?

Teaching and Research in the Department of German at Leeds

 

 

All members of the Department of German are engaged in research into a range of aspects of German Culture, History and Society. The results of this research are published in books, articles and reviews. It is on the basis of this research that we are able to offer modules in the department which are cutting-edge and reflect the latest thinking on ‘things German’.

 

The Department of German is particularly pleased to offer modules such as Introduction to Modern Germany which bring together the research interests of a number of members of staff. The research activities and publications of the following lecturers contribute to this module and and enhance your learning experience:

 

 

Paul Cooke: Representing East Germany since Unification (Oxford: Berg, 2005)

 

Ingo Cornils: ‘The German Student Movement. Legend and Legacy’, in: Debatte Vol.4 / No.2, pp. 36-62, 1996; ‘Successful failure? The impact of the German Student Movement on the Federal Republic of Germany’, in: Stuart Taberner / Frank Finlay (eds.), Recasting German Identity. Culture, Politics and Literature in the Berlin Republic, pp. 105-122, Rochester: Camden House 2002

 

Frank Finlay [with Stuart Taberner (eds.)]: Recasting German Identity, Culture, Literature and Politics in the Bonn Republic (Rochester: Camden House, 2002)

Chris Homewood: currently writing a Ph.D on representations of 1970s’ German terrorism in German film

 

Annette Seidel Arpacı, ‘National Memory’s “Schlüsselkinder”: Migration, Pedagogy, and Constructions of German “Remembrance Culture”’, in Beyond Normalisation: Society, Culture and Politics in the Berlin Republic, eds. Paul Cooke and Stuart Taberner (Rochester: Camden House, 2006).

Ingrid Sharp: ‘Berlin and Gender Relations’ in Schoenfeld, C. and  Finnan,C. (eds) Female Creativity in the Weimar Republic, Routledge 2004; ‘The Sexual Unification of Germany’, Journal of the History of Sexuality (2004)

Stuart Taberner: German Literature of the 1990s and Beyond (Rochester: Camden House, 2005).

 


 Essential Reading

 

These texts will cost you around £60 and will suffice for both semesters. They will also be of great use in future German modules.

 

Overview

Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation

 

1870-1914

Volker R. Berghahn, Imperial Germany, 1871-1914: Economy, Society, Culture and Politics  


1918-1990

Mary Fulbrook, A History of Germany: The Divided Nation: 1918-1990

 

1945-present

Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945

 

Additional Recommended Reading

 

Jonathan Sperber (ed.), Germany 1800-1870

Michael Stürmer, The German Empire

 

 

The Lectures

 

Lectures take place every week. You must complement the lectures with your own reading. This part of the module is a traditional university lecture series: you will be expected to read in advance and make notes. After the lecture, you should go through your notes and summarise what you have learnt.

 

 

Semester One

 

 

  1. From the French Revolution of 1789 to German Unification in 1871 (ASA)

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapters 2 and 3

 

  1. Bismarck (ASA): an authoritarian unified German state or a liberal state?

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapters 2 and 3

Link to notes in German

 

  1. Weltpolitik (FF): an expansionist German state or a Kulturnation?

Reading: Volker Berghahn, Imperial Germany, ‘Imperialism’

                        Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 4

 

  1. The First World War (FF): a defence of German culture?

Reading: Volker Berghahn, Imperial Germany, ‘Imperialism’

                        Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 4

 

  1. Weimar: Instability (PC): the first liberal German state

Reading: Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 3

 

  1. Weimar: Golden Years (PC): Germany - western, tolerant and democratic?

Reading: Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 3

 

  1. Reading Week

 

  1. The Rise of Hitler and 1933-1938 (FF): back to authoritarianism

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 5

                        Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 4

 

  1. The Holocaust (ASA): the end of German national identity?

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 5

                        Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 4

 

  1. From Stalingrad to Defeat (ASA): Germany against the world?

Reading: Mary Fulbrook The Divided Nation: Chapter 5

 

  1. Final week of semester

 

 

 

ASA is Dr Annette Seidel Arpacı; PC is Dr Paul Cooke; FF is Professor Frank Finlay; IS is Ms Ingrid Sharp.

 

 

The Lectures

 

Semester Two

 

  1. 1945-49 (ASA): visions of Germany after the defeat?

Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 1

                        Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 6

 

  1. 1945-49 (ASA): the divided nation?

Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 1

                        Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 6

 

  1. FRG 1950s and 1960s (ASA): a liberal, western democracy?

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 6

                        Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 2

 

  1. FRG 1970s and 1980s (ASA): whatever happened to German national identity?

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 6

                        Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 2

 

  1. The GDR 1949-1989 (IS)

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 7

                        Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapters 3 and 4

  1. Alltag and Ideology: Life in the GDR (IS)

Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 7

                        Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapters 3 and 4

 

 

  1. FRG - Achievements and Failures (ASA): at last, a successful German state?

Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 5

                        Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 9

 

  1. GDR - Achievements and Failures (IS): the ‘better’ Germany?

Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 5

                        Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 9

 

  1. Unification (PC): the ‘German problem’ resolved?

Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 6

Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 8

 

  1. Unification (PC): hope for a better, more ‘normal’ German future?

Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 6

Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 8

 

  1. Final week of semester

 

 

ASA is Dr Annette Seidel Arpacı; PC is Dr Paul Cooke; FF is Professor Frank Finlay; IS is Ms Ingrid Sharp.

 

 

Seminars

 

Seminars begin are weekly and begin in week one. In seminars in odd weeks, you will discuss what you have heard in the lectures, that is, be asked to summarise their content and comment on them. You will also develop vocabulary and structures in these odd seminars. In seminars in even weeks, you will tackle the ‘Aufgaben’/tasks – in groups - which are included at the end of this handbook. The seminars are conducted entirely in German and tasks MUST BE prepared in advance.

 

Semester One

 

Seminar 1 (week two)

            Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapters 2 and 3

Seminar 2 (week four)

            Reading: Volker Berghahn, Imperial Germany, ‘Imperialism’

                           Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 4

Seminar 3 (week six)

            Reading: Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 3

Seminar 4 (week eight)

            Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 5

                           Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 4

Seminar 5 (week ten)

            Reading: Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 5

 

Semester Two

 

Seminar 1 (week two)

            Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 1

                           Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 6

Seminar 2 (week four)

            Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 6

                            Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 2

Seminar 3 (week six)

            Reading: Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 7

                           Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapters 3 and 4

Seminar 4 (week eight)

            Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 5

                           Mary Fulbrook, The Divided Nation: Chapter 9

Seminar 5 (week ten)

Reading: Pól O’Dochartaigh, Germany since 1945: Chapter 6

   Stefan Berger, Inventing the Nation: Chapter 8

 


Assessment

 

In German

 

  • An essay of 250 words in German to be handed in at the end of reading week of semester one (25%). This will be a descriptive essay.

 

Example question (there will be a choice!):

‘Beschreiben Sie die deutsche Kolonialpolitik!’

‘Beschreiben Sie Bismarcks politische Karriere!’

 

  • An essay of 500 words in German to be handed on the first day of the semester one examination period (25%). This essay will require you to make an argument.

 

Example questions:

‘Der Zusammenbruch der Weimarer Republik war vorhersehbar. Diskutieren Sie!’

‘Das deutsche Volk wollte Hitler und hat ihn auch verdient! Diskutieren Sie!’

           

  • An examination of two hours during the semester two examination period. Students will be required to answer an essay question in German (50%).

 

In all cases, equal weighting will given to accuracy and range of German and to content and argument. Feedback will be given on student presentations in the course of seminars and advice given as to necessary improvements in both language and understanding of context.

 

For guidance on how to write a good semester essay, see:

 

http://www.german.leeds.ac.uk/core3/campus/Writing%20your%20essay.htm

 

 

For guidance on how to write a good examination essay, see:

 

http://www.german.leeds.ac.uk/learning/campus/How%20to%20write%20successful%20exam%20essays.htm
Background Reading for Presentations and Essay-Writing

 

 


Essay Questions Christmas 2005

 

IMG essay titles Semester 1 2005-6

 

First essay (descriptive 25% of Module mark)

 

Was verstehen Sie unter ‘Weltpolitik’ im Zusammenhang mit dem sogenannten wilhelminischen Zeitalter?

 

Erläutern Sie die wichtigsten Kriegsziele der Deutschen im ersten Weltkrieg.

 

Beschreiben Sie die innenpolitische Situation im neu geschaffenen

Deutschen Reich (nach 1871).

 

 

Second essay (more analytical 25% of Module mark):

 

Wie wichtig war Gustav Stresemann für die Stabilität der Weimarer Republik der 20er Jahre?

 

Nehmen Sie Stellung zur folgenden Behauptung: ‘Die Dolchstoßlegende war der Hauptgrund für das Scheitern der Weimarer Republik.’

 

‘Das nationalsozialistische Deutschland basierte auf der Diktatur einer

Minderheit’. Diskutieren Sie!

 

 

Modern German History

 

General

Richard Evans, Rethinking German History

Mary Fulbrook, ed. German History since 1800

Thomas Nipperdey, Germany from Napoleon to Bismarck

Simms, Brendan, The Struggle for Mastery in Germany, 1779-1850

Blackbourn, David, The Long Nineteenth Century: A History of Germany, 1780-1918

 

Nationalism, Liberalism, and Conservatism in Nineteenth-Century Germany

Levinger, Matthew Bernard, Enlightened Nationalism: The Transformation of Prussian Political Culture, 1806-1848

Sheehan, James J., German Liberalism in the Nineteenth Century

 

German Nationalism post-1848 and Unification

Schulze, Hagen, The Course of German Nationalism, 1991.

Breuilly, J., The Formation of the First German Nation-State, 1800-1870

Sheehan, James, “What is German History? Reflections on the Role of the Nation in German History and Historiography,” Journal of Modern History 53/1, 1981: 1-23.

 

Kaiserreich and Sonderweg

Mommsen, Wolfgang, Imperial Germany 1867-1918: Politics, Culture and Society in an Authoritarian State

Wehler, Hans-Ulrich, The German Empire, 1871-1918

Evans, Richard J. (ed.), Society and Politics in Wilhelmine Germany

Berghahn, V. R., Imperial Germany, 1871-1914

Blackbourn, David. and Eley, Geoff., The Peculiarities of German History

 

World War I

Kocka, Jürgen, Facing Total War: German society, 1914-1918

Berghahn, Volker, Germany and the Approach of War in 1914

Fischer, Fritz, War of Illusions: German Policies from 1911 to 1914

Chickering, Roger, Imperial Germany and the Great War

 

German Culture from Fin-de-Siècle to Weimar

Schorske, Carl, Fin de Siècle Vienna: Politics and Culture

Fritzsche, Peter, Reading Berlin 1900

Gay, Peter, Weimar Culture: The Outsider as Insider

Hermand, Jost und Trommler Frank, Die Kultur in der Weimarer Republik

 

The Weimar Republic

Feldman, Gerald, The Great Disorder: Politics, Economics, and Society in the German Inflation, 1914-1924

Mommsen, Hans, The Rise and Fall of Weimar Democracy

Peukert, Detlev, The Weimar Republic: The Crisis of Classical Modernity

 

Third Reich/World War II

Peukert, Detlev, Inside Nazi Germany

Kershaw, Ian, The Nazi Dictatorship

Kershaw, Ian, Popular Opinion and Political Dissent in the Third Reich

Kershaw, Ian, The Hitler Myth

Kershaw, Ian, Hitler

Mommsen, Hans, From Weimar to Auschwitz.  Essays in German History

Browning, Christopher, The Path to Genocide.  Essays on Launching the Final Solution

Browning, Christopher, Ordinary Men: Reserve Police Battalion 101 and the Final Solution in Poland

Goldhagen, Daniel, Hitler's Willing Executioners.  Ordinary Germans and the Holocaust

 

Postwar (East/West Germany)

Fulbrook, Mary, The Two Germanies 1945-1990 (1992)

Fulbrook, Mary, Inside East Germany: Anatomy of a Dictatorship (1995)

Maier, Charles, Dissolution.  The Crisis of Communism and the End of East Germany (1997)

 

 

 


Past Essay and Exam Papers

 

 

 

 

Introduction to Modern Germany

From Unification to Unification

 

GERM1060

  

 

Reading Week Essay 

 

 

Write an essay in German of 250 words to be handed in ON THE FIRST MONDAY AFTER reading week (25%).

 

 

Either: ‘Beschreiben Sie die deutsche Kolonialpolitik!’

 

Or: ‘Beschreiben Sie Bismarcks politische Karriere!’

 

Or: ‘Beschreiben Sie den Anfang und das Ende der Weimarer Republik!’

 

 

Introduction to Modern Germany

From Unification to Unification

 

GERM1060

 

Semester One Essay

 

 

Write an essay of 500 words in German on ONE of the following. The essay is to be handed on the first day of the semester one examination period (25%).

 

This essay will require you to make an argument (i.e not just be descriptive, as in the last essay). You must advance a point of view!

 

See

 

http://www.german.leeds.ac.uk/core3/campus/Writing%20your%20essay.htm

 

for essay writing guidelines.

 

 

  1. ‘Das Ende der Weimarer Republik und der Aufstieg Hitlers waren beide vorhersehbar’. Diskutieren Sie!
  2. ‘Das deutsche Volk wollte die Vernichtung der Juden oder hat zumindest nichts dagegen unternommen’. Diskutieren Sie!
  3. ‘Der Holocaust bedeutete das Ende einer deutschen Nationalidentität’. Diskutieren Sie!
  4. ‘Die Vorstellung, dass Deutschland den Krieg je gewinnen könnte, war eine Selbsttäuschung’. Diskutieren Sie!

 

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This question paper consists of 1 printed page, each of which is identified by the code number GERM 1060

 

GERM 1060

 © UNIVERSITY OF LEEDS

(2005)

 

Introduction to Modern Germany

 

Time allowed: 2 hours

 

 

Write an essay on ONE of the following topics in German.

 

Equal weighting will given to accuracy and range of German and to content and argument.

 

 

  1. ‘Seit 1945 ist Deutschland ein völlig anderes Land als vorher’. Diskutieren Sie!
  2. ‘Die BRD war der bessere der beiden deutschen Nachkriegsstaaten’. Diskutieren Sie!
  3. ‘Der Beginn des Kalten Krieges bedeutete die endgültige Teilung Deutschlands’. Diskutieren Sie!
  4. ‘Das Wirtschaftswunder in der BRD zementierte den westdeutschen Staat’. Diskutieren Sie!
  5. ‘Willy Brandts Ostpolitik war die größte Leistung der 70er Jahre’. Diskutieren Sie!
  6. ‘Helmut Kohl war der beste Bundeskanzler der Bundesrepublik Deutschland vor 1990’. Diskutieren Sie!
  7. ‘Ein echter Sozialismus auf deutschem Boden – das hat die DDR nie geschafft’. Diskutieren Sie!
  8. ‘Manches war in der DDR besser’. Diskutieren Sie!
  9. Michail Gorbatschow hat den Fall der Berliner Mauer herbeigeführt, und nicht die Deutschen’. Diskutieren Sie!
  10. ‘Mit der Wiedervereinigung wurde Deutschland endlich wieder “normal”’. Diskutieren Sie!

Marking Scheme

 

The Department of German operates marking schemes for essays, dissertations, assignments and presentations in line with the University’s classification of degrees using the 20-90 module grade scale.

 

Essays and dissertations in English/German (not as part of Core Language modules)

 

The level of knowledge and critical understanding of the topic demonstrated by the candidate; the ability to organise and present this knowledge in a coherent and convincing manner; the ability to identify and make clear the key issues involved in answering the question; the ability to express ideas fluently in appropriate, correctly spelled and punctuated, and grammatically accurate language.  For essays submitted as coursework, references and bibliographical details should be presented as set out in the Departmental guidelines on the submission of written work.  Essays that do not conform to these standards will achieve a lower mark.

 

To achieve a First class mark (70-90%), an essay will typically have some or all of the following characteristics:

 

Ø       will demonstrate a high level of knowledge and a full understanding of the topic,

Ø       will show a full understanding of the requirements of the question, covering all the ground required to give a full answer;

Ø       will show a high level of critical analysis;

Ø       will have a clear structure and coherent argument throughout, clearly identifying the key issues;

Ø       will offer full support for all points made;

Ø       will make use of a good range of primary and secondary sources;

Ø       will be well written throughout, stylistically clear and fully adequate to express ideas;

Ø       will conform fully to the standards outlined in the Departmental guidelines for the presentation of written work including clear and appropriate referencing, correct spelling and punctuation.

 

To achieve a mark in the Upper Second category (60-69%) II, i mark, an essay will typically have some or all of the following characteristics:

Ø       will demonstrate a good level of knowledge and an understanding of the topic,

Ø       will show a good understanding of the requirements of the question, covering most of the ground required to give a full answer;

Ø       will show a high level of critical analysis;

Ø       will have a clear structure and coherent argument throughout, clearly identifying the key issues;

Ø       will offer support for the points made;

Ø       will make use of a range of primary and secondary sources;

Ø       will be largely well written throughout, stylistically clear and adequate to express ideas;

Ø       will largely conform to the standards outlined in the Departmental guidelines for the presentation of written work including clear and appropriate referencing, correct spelling and punctuation.

 

To achieve a mark in the Lower Second category (50-59%), an essay will typically have some or all of the following characteristics:

Ø       will demonstrate a reasonable knowledge and understanding of the topic,

Ø       will show a reasonable understanding of the requirements of the question, covering at least half the ground required to give a full answer;

Ø       may show some level of critical analysis although the answer may be largely exposition;

Ø       will show some attempt at a clear structure although the line of argument may not always be clear and coherent. At least half of the key issues will be identified although there may be some irrelevant material;

Ø       will offer some support for the points made;

Ø       will make use of a limited number of primary and secondary sources;

Ø       may not be well written, but will be adequate to express ideas;

Ø       may not conform to the standards outlined in the Departmental guidelines for the presentation of written work including clear and appropriate referencing, correct spelling and punctuation.

 

To achieve a Third Class mark, an essay will typically have some or all of the following characteristics:

Ø       will demonstrate only a limited knowledge and understanding of the topic,

Ø       will show little understanding of the requirements of the question, covering less than half the ground required to give a full answer;

Ø       will not demonstrate critical analysis;

Ø       will be badly organised and the line of argument will be unclear and incoherent. Fewer than half of the key issues will be identified and there will be a significant amount of irrelevant material;

Ø       will offer inadequate support for the points made;

Ø       will make use of few if any primary and secondary sources;

Ø       will not be well written, language may be inadequate to express ideas;

Ø       will not conform to the standards outlined in the Departmental guidelines for the presentation of written work including clear and appropriate referencing, correct spelling and punctuation.

 

To achieve a fail mark, an essay will typically have some or all of the following characteristics:

Ø       will demonstrate very limited knowledge and understanding of the topic,

Ø       will show little or no understanding of the requirements of the question, covering little if any of the ground required to give a full answer;

Ø       will not demonstrate any critical analysis;

Ø       will show little or no shape or direction, will be badly organised and the line of argument unclear and incoherent. Few if any of the key issues will be identified and there will be a significant amount of irrelevant material;

Ø       will offer little or no support for the points made;

Ø       will make use of few if any primary and secondary sources;

Ø       will not be well written, language may be inadequate to express ideas;

Ø       will not conform to the standards outlined in the Departmental guidelines for the presentation of written work including clear and appropriate referencing, correct spelling and punctuation.


Essay evaluation profile

NB: the mark given to this essay is provisional, subject to confirmation by the external examiner

Name: .......................................................     Question: ................................

Marker: ....................................................     Moderator: ......................................

Overall Class: ..........................................     Mark: ...............................................

Organisation

Strong introduction                                  . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            Introduction vague

Clear progression of argument                . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            Points made at random

Firm conclusion based on arguments    . . . . . . . . . . . . . .      Conclusion unclear

Grasp of issues

Issues understood in detail                     . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            Failure to grasp details

Broader issues grasped                            . . . . . . . . . . . . . .           Broader context absent               

Analysis

Key issues clearly identified                   . . . . . . . . . . . . . .      issues not made clear

Coherent and convincing argument       . . . . . . . . . . . . . .      implausible, incoherent

Language (German)

Clear, well-formed sentences                   . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            Sentences muddled

Correct and effective use of vocab        . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            Vocab is poor

Grammar is accurate                                  . . . . . . . . . . . . . .      Grammar is poor

Good range of expression                        . . . . . . . . . . . . . .      Poor range of expression

Use of sources

Sources assimilated, well-used               . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            Reliant on undigested 
and adequately acknowledged                                                                                 material

Good bibliography                                    . . . . . . . . . . . . . .            poor bibliography                        

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